The storyboard has some good ideas and the pace of the editing works at times. However, I'm struggling to see the shot variation and you only have 2 shots in the first minute. Go back to you markscheme and check that you are going to get into level 3/4 with the ideas in your storyboard.
In the first mintute there will be alot of movement therefore I felt minimal shots would be more suitable, as it will make the story more clear. I shall look back at the markscheme and check.
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