Music Video Feed Back

As part of this process I felt it would be a good idea to ask my target market on what they thought of my music video. I asked 10 people to go onto my blog and watch all four of my music video drafts and to give me feeback on what they thought. When people got back to me I found that they all said each time it had progressed and was better. The majority of people said that the first draft was good however felt it was a bit boring and didn't have much phase or movement. Therefore the second, third and fourth were a lot better as he moved about more which created phase and so did the editing. Another element that made the music video have phase was the variety of different shots as my first draft consisted of a lot of shots with him jsut playing the guitar, therefore this time I have used different agnels and used more movement with the camera.At the beggining it pans around the artsit, Many people liked this bit and the transition into the next shot, creating a powerful start. Everyone I asked liked the fourth draft best as they felt this was the most successful. They felt the linking with the candel shot was clever as to how it was repeated throughout the music video and then was the last shot in the music video, ending it well, and how it ends with the candel blowing out. Everyone commented on the surrounding/location of the music video and thought it was great and looked very good. They also felt that the location sutied the artist and his genre of music. They also commneted on it being in black and white, which many of them liked, as it is diffrent and not many music videos are in black and white, therefore it makes it memorable. A negative comment on my fourth draft was there was a slight issue with lip sinking, therefore for my final I shall ensure that the lip sinking is exact as this is a very important part of the music video.  Overall I am very pleased with the feeback I collect from my target market and have found it very useful. Now I have collected this feedback from my target market I can make these changes to my music promo.